hi, people pointed out i did a sub-optimal job of establishing the setting of the previous scene. i agreed and added a new page in between pg 12 and 13 chock full of all new stuff to help everyone get better context for everything. be sure to check out the video in the news box for a supplemental video. so you get 2 pages today instead of one. whoo hoo
*~click here to read that new page~*
and sorry about any confusion